Haiku #1

Pretend this is real–
yes, it’s absurd and surreal–
just close your eyes, dear.

Pretend this is real.

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7 Comments Add yours

  1. Nice. I am not pretending. It’s nice. It’s really nice.

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    1. RizaTalan says:

      Thanks!

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  2. Lovely poem. This really touched me… just pretend until you succeed. Don´t worry, just close your eyes….how wonderfully written!! So few words and you got my heart.

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    1. RizaTalan says:

      Thanks, Little Sunshine! I’m flattered you feel that way. 😊

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      1. You have real talent:-) There´s got to be someone who tells you so! (and that haiku really did touch me.)

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      2. RizaTalan says:

        I’m glad it has touched you like this. Thank you so much for the appreciation! 🙂

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